Comments of chapter undefined of DIDN'T ASK FOR THIS.

im confused... who is it this time? another girl from the past? there is apophis, scanatch and ashsomething who is is the cover, i think she was the demon lord that mc fought.... but who is this elf eleanor

This fic would benefit from having a chapter dedicated to just women in the book. It's getting ridiculous at this point. This is the what 7th? We have 1. Grayfia 2. Apophis 3. Kaori?(The school one he saved from the guys near the start) 3. Marin (Which i assumed was the prologue woman's reincarnation based on characters dialogue and hints ) 4. Saint hoe1 5. Saint student hoe2 6. This new Elf queen that knows him from somewhere magically with no background knowledge whatsoever. And finally 7. Lest we forget the tragedy that was Scathach, which i honestly hope she gets forgotten because well.... let's not go there for a fourth time. Like dude whats going on? You may as well write a crack fic or H*ntai at this point with the obscene amount of woman love interests involved.

It was confusing at first the random flachbacks and pov switches but its all coming together. Its flowing smoothly only thing is i wish there was more chapters about the school and with marin, but we'll get there eventually. Great work so far author ill wait for the next volume to be uploaded and check out your other stories in the meantime.

Sad

an auxiliary chapter is needed explaining who is who

Thanks for the chapter 🙂

Thanks for chapter

Thanks for the chapter

I am saddened by the fact that with all the timeskips the "event will be in a week" was missed and we didn't get cosplay chapter + the dress was never mentioned :/

So the elf queen is scathach right

Thanks for the chapter definitivly looking Forward to the time you continue writing this its has an intriguing past.

Noooo

Thanks for the chapter. I understand, I hope you finish your first FanFic soon and come back to this one

Thanks for the Chapter

Fua loco me gusto esta historia xD

Is this Dropped?

Can you transfer your fan fiction to another site? I don't want to lose him.

thanks for the update