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This fic would benefit from having a chapter dedicated to just women in the book. It's getting ridiculous at this point. This is the what 7th? We have 1. Grayfia 2. Apophis 3. Kaori?(The school one he saved from the guys near the start) 3. Marin (Which i assumed was the prologue woman's reincarnation based on characters dialogue and hints ) 4. Saint hoe1 5. Saint student hoe2 6. This new Elf queen that knows him from somewhere magically with no background knowledge whatsoever. And finally 7. Lest we forget the tragedy that was Scathach, which i honestly hope she gets forgotten because well.... let's not go there for a fourth time. Like dude whats going on? You may as well write a crack fic or H*ntai at this point with the obscene amount of woman love interests involved.
It was confusing at first the random flachbacks and pov switches but its all coming together. Its flowing smoothly only thing is i wish there was more chapters about the school and with marin, but we'll get there eventually. Great work so far author ill wait for the next volume to be uploaded and check out your other stories in the meantime.