I like what your doing so far with this keep doing it your way it's good to ask for advice but remember never change who you are also my questions are
1 will he have a pet/monster tame?
2 do you plan to include dungeons?
3 will he have some type of romance?
more questions later
ahhhh I thought I could see his advance to second star because there was much Left in the chapter but no.
EMOTIONAL DAMAGE.
Anyway keep it up, really nice Content.