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Comments of chapter undefined of My Goalkeeping System

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Caminho
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He is very bad

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Erelbrinx
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I'm okay with character development and improvement. But, making the Mc have almost no positive characteristics makes it unlikable. He needs to at least have some redeeming qualities to him. For example, a hardworking Mc that lacks talent. I honestly can't imagine this Mc having a professional football career. He couldn't even solve a simple problem as 2 hours of gym time. The only thing that going for him is having a girlfriend at this point.

Sy0MaAdBat1
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MC bu kadar berbatken nasıl Emma ile sevgili olabiliyor şaşırıyorum

chigs026
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Bro u use team like Supreme United and that is like very confusing and u use soccer players names like lelemar