Comments of chapter undefined of Becoming The Ancestor of Villain

Yeah do use the site grammarly, it automatically corrects grammar. I like this fic already but the cultivation stages needed to be explained properly. This is like too fast paced. Should have reduced the yunlei cheat that way reducing the mc's cheat. 25jade level is too OP I guess. You should have made this slow and less OP so there could be more chapters. And the first 3 to 4 paragraphs were very well done as I felt proper emotions in it but afterwards it felt bland