Nr_Yet1208
Thank you for the chapter. Right now I feel like this story needs more action. Not exactly right now, but perhaps it will develop with Theo getting kidnapped, meaning in a few chapters or so? It's not that bad in the moment since there is tension building up, but maybe I just crave violence? Oh dear, anyway I forgot to ask but was that the end for the girl with the creepy mother or will it continue? It didn't really answer all the questions I have, so hopefully it gets a continuation, even if the girl's dead. I look forward to what you will do. I know what I wrote is not really an opinion but I hope it still helped somewhat?