EvansKannon
Great chapters author, it was a pleasant surprise to see an update of two chapters. The fight against Kaido was really fun to read, and the other fights, like Saeko vs King, were also cool. hehehe now apparently it will become tradition for Hector to leave children in every universe he visits, I think he just didn't have a child in JoJo because there were no women available at that time, but that's ok, Hector won't be doing anything wrong by leaving one son with Hiyori in One Piece, and it is almost a tradition in this universe to be an absent father and let others take care of the child. well, it seems that Hector has already done everything he could do in the world of pirates, I assume we will return to Marvel in the next chapter, it will be good to see Hector acting as Eidolon again and interacting with Shego, Black Cat and Mary Jane again (I really want know what their interaction will be like after the party). anyway, you did an excellent job in these two chapters author, I'm eagerly awaiting the next ones, but before I go I want to leave a small contribution, and tribute to this story, I'm not a professional artist, but I took the liberty of portraying Hector/Eidolon through AIs, and these were the results, I hope they turned out cool:
I kinda get it, the fight is supposed to be for him having fun, but honestly I am struggling to feel any emotions from him, I have seen characters that do stuff for fun, even hold back. But you built your MC as being either quick to act or don't care. I just skimmed fast pace, barely read. I am so waiting for back to the original world and some actual, impactful to the story, action happened. Something canon and see him deal with it.