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Comments of chapter undefined of Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel

LollipoPReapeR
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Author if you have trouble editing etc, before you post the chapter, paste the entire thing into ChatGPT and ask it for a quick editing. Should make things read a lot nicer. Probably faster than a conventional editor too…

000Striker000
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I know that D4C can Teleport you anywhere along as you are between 2 Items/people/things, so my question is....does he have a minimum size limit to the use of this ability...? because I remember reading somewhere that 'Funny Valentines' at one time he uses 2 'dust particles' to Teleport somewhere. and if yes, then can the MC go beyond 'Funny Valentines' powers to even use "Atoms" or "Molecules" to Teleport???

king_Gurra10
king_Gurra10Lv13king_Gurra10

i love the slice of life it's good to enjoy slow progress i want a real character not a perfect MC.

ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4ObamaUchiha

The main problem i have with this fanfic is that his abilities and power progress so fast compared to the plot, which means that the plot is suffering from your poor character ability pacing. so far its pretty good but this guy already has the ability to do so much at chapter 12 and I really think this can go for a lot longer and have a better structure. I have an idea, have the MCU plot progress really slow and use the other world as a way to take a break from taking a long time on the MCU world if making a long fanfic takes a toll on your mind.

KoroSensei14
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Good story so far and your English is great so don’t worry about it can’t wait for mc to head back to New York though and show some people who’s boss. Maybe have him test out of high school and enter college early and graduate there early as well so he can start up a company sooner in maybe two years or so and after he gets ride of kingpin steal all his assets and hide them in offshore accounts using Batman’s knowledge to fund charity’s or his organization he founds from summons off the books so that nothing can be traced back to the future company he makes.

MT_Rouse
MT_RouseLv3MT_Rouse

It is exceptionally good book and I am currently enjoying it greatly

ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4ObamaUchiha

but also slow down the power progression. i could brainstorm more, and as an idea maybe you should remove the other world tickets cause that would only progress the pacing.

RaijinGod
RaijinGodLv4RaijinGod

Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter. 😁👍

Flightless_Man
Flightless_ManLv3Flightless_Man

Thanks for the chapter

Solgalao
SolgalaoLv14Solgalao

Ty for the great chapter!

Genist
GenistLv4Genist

Didn't starkiller also have his own spaceship as a possesion? Kinda feel like MC should have gotten that one as well in his inventory if we're being fair.

LazyAdept
LazyAdeptLv7LazyAdept

Thanks for the chapter

Acael
AcaelLv6Acael

Thanks for the chapter

Teeni93
Teeni93Lv1Teeni93

thank you for chapter :)

Kurama_is_tsundere
Kurama_is_tsundereLv6Kurama_is_tsundere

thanks for the chapter and keep up the great work. 😁👍

draculemorningstar
draculemorningstarLv4draculemorningstar

thanks for the chapter looking forward to more also I really like the relationship between his grandparents and him

glmo11
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harem

degermon
degermonLv6degermon

Thanks

Ject101
Ject101Lv3Ject101

I like the story so thx and please keep going! p.s. when is he getting Shego?

Aydehan
AydehanLv13Aydehan

Dostum nerelisin bilmiyorum ama lütfen şu gachayı tekrar düzenle. Aşırı Op ve okuduğum zaman bu opliği gözümü yoruyor. Keşke gacha miktarını sadece ayda 10 kadar yapsaydın absürt bir 40-50-60 civarı olmasaydı.