EvansKannon
I know that D4C can Teleport you anywhere along as you are between 2 Items/people/things, so my question is....does he have a minimum size limit to the use of this ability...? because I remember reading somewhere that 'Funny Valentines' at one time he uses 2 'dust particles' to Teleport somewhere. and if yes, then can the MC go beyond 'Funny Valentines' powers to even use "Atoms" or "Molecules" to Teleport???
The main problem i have with this fanfic is that his abilities and power progress so fast compared to the plot, which means that the plot is suffering from your poor character ability pacing. so far its pretty good but this guy already has the ability to do so much at chapter 12 and I really think this can go for a lot longer and have a better structure. I have an idea, have the MCU plot progress really slow and use the other world as a way to take a break from taking a long time on the MCU world if making a long fanfic takes a toll on your mind.
Good story so far and your English is great so don’t worry about it can’t wait for mc to head back to New York though and show some people who’s boss. Maybe have him test out of high school and enter college early and graduate there early as well so he can start up a company sooner in maybe two years or so and after he gets ride of kingpin steal all his assets and hide them in offshore accounts using Batman’s knowledge to fund charity’s or his organization he founds from summons off the books so that nothing can be traced back to the future company he makes.