Comments of chapter undefined of CROOKSHANKS-A Harry Potter Fanfiction
CROOKSHANKS-A Harry Potter Fanfiction
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how about the Nemean dojo bassed on the lion that could not be harmed by normal/mortal means. I am super curious if Crosh babbles about the cybertronians a natural golem made of iron birthed from a planet would Harry be able to find earth versions of them lol beast wars were always my fav but if Crosh has sway over the castle can imagine the shenanigans he could pull if he could piggyback off harry and turn Hogwarts into a bloody titan for the final battle would be hilarious
I am really enjoying this! Absolutely hilarious! Have to say though, I found the Neville part cheesy and cringy. I really think you would be better off not adding in random anime powers, and instead crossover with something like Marvel or Highschool DxD if you find the vanilla Potterverse too boring. For one it is confusing. I donât watch every anime, so I have no idea what Nevilleâs power is, or how it works, or anything about it really. The more random powers you add, the more confusing it will get. It also distracts from Crookshanks and Harry, who are supposed to be the actual MCâs. If you want to empower someone, just have them join the dojo and get OP that way.
