Sixth
I don't know what anyone looks like. The only character description is the child and that was just a black dress and a head pop off. No hair color height age nadda
Children are not my preference in novels but it's only the first chapter so let's try it.
interesting hook to the story, Sixth. let's see how things develop. I do hope he comes around to accepting a fatherly role for the little girl though
Why didn't he want her to say daddy? Isn't she his own daughter? :( Also, are they npc or real people in another world?
I don’t normally Read novels with kids in the story but this one chapter has started to make me think otherwise. Good work on the chapter
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Nice chapter!
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first chapter looking good
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