Sixth
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Children are not my preference in novels but it's only the first chapter so let's try it.
interesting hook to the story, Sixth. let's see how things develop. I do hope he comes around to accepting a fatherly role for the little girl though
Why didn't he want her to say daddy? Isn't she his own daughter? :( Also, are they npc or real people in another world?
I don’t normally Read novels with kids in the story but this one chapter has started to make me think otherwise. Good work on the chapter
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Nice chapter!
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first chapter looking good
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