37 chapters in and author this time you haven't really bothered to show mcs growth..u didn't show any of his training or how much has he grown stronger from before what are his plans his maturity any of it was not described...
Hey author, will you keep her or use her death for MC's growth. I think his personality is still too stiff, he should awaken his bloodline, hone his skills and try to court these beauties around him.
