Human_Sinner
Thanks for the chapter!! Even though it felt like you were slightly rushing through the storlyline with the frequent time-skips it was not to the point of being uncomfortable or disjointed from the main story. Plus it helps that the majority of the time-skips in this chapter were used to basically gloss over simple and boring filler content with almost no lasting connections, scenes, or characters besides those you actually wrote about between time-skips. I am kind of curious about the actions and reactions of the other characters directly and indirectly involved though, and would like to read/see more details from their point of view during the time-skips. For example more info or scenes during this time period/s involving the actions or reactions of : -Aizen; -The Captain Commander; -The Other Captains &/or Lieutenants of Soul Society; -The MC's family, friends, direct subordinates, etc... that are in the human world (what did they do during these time skips?), etc... Final Thoughts, I liked the chapter but do not want you to make a habit of chapters like this one that involve so many time-skips unless it is purely for training/learning montages. If ANYTHING else is set to happen during the timeline then please just try to write a normal chapter.