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Comments of chapter undefined of Bleach : Human Immortal

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Shadow1325
Shadow1325Lv15Shadow1325

Thanks for the chapter!! Even though it felt like you were slightly rushing through the storlyline with the frequent time-skips it was not to the point of being uncomfortable or disjointed from the main story. Plus it helps that the majority of the time-skips in this chapter were used to basically gloss over simple and boring filler content with almost no lasting connections, scenes, or characters besides those you actually wrote about between time-skips. I am kind of curious about the actions and reactions of the other characters directly and indirectly involved though, and would like to read/see more details from their point of view during the time-skips. For example more info or scenes during this time period/s involving the actions or reactions of : -Aizen; -The Captain Commander; -The Other Captains &/or Lieutenants of Soul Society; -The MC's family, friends, direct subordinates, etc... that are in the human world (what did they do during these time skips?), etc... Final Thoughts, I liked the chapter but do not want you to make a habit of chapters like this one that involve so many time-skips unless it is purely for training/learning montages. If ANYTHING else is set to happen during the timeline then please just try to write a normal chapter.

Human_Sinner
Human_SinnerAuthorHuman_Sinner

This one will be the only time skip, I didn't want to write another volume of another school/academy arc. 👍

McTripp
McTrippLv13McTripp

welcome back 🙏 and thanks for the chapter author san. 😊

Raymond_Ogunbowale
Raymond_OgunbowaleLv14Raymond_Ogunbowale

Thanks for the chapter

Daoist866791
Daoist866791Lv2Daoist866791

Thanks for the Chapter Author.

TgNovels
TgNovelsLv14TgNovels

Nice!