Comments of chapter undefined of Danmachi: Blood Mage

Danmachi: Blood Mage

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Thomas_EdersonLv13Thomas_Ederson

a lot of the writing contains an enormous amount of redundancy. certain gestures of a characters should be left to the reader's imagination rather than writing every single thing happening. Or rather there is too much filler content.

1yr

The_Nameless_One81Lv3The_Nameless_One81

Not that I am complaining but wouldn't it be better to join Freya...Freya would most likely try all in her power to hide his secrets and because of her obsession she would help him better than Loki who wouldn't trust him bcoz of his race and bcoz she cares for her Familia...

2yr

Crimson_KingLv6Crimson_King

I was hoping for Freya. Ive never seen a fanfic with her as the Goddess. The only one was a fanfic where Bell was her Odr and joins her familia. Hope you at least dont give hate to Freya. Just make her so that she came down to earth to look for her destined Love and she does not sleep around. By doing that you fix most problmes people have with her. Also make Rose his advisor, if hes going to get one.

2yr

Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍

2yr