angel_bastudas
This is pretty messed up
I think the paragraphs are out of order..
This whole chapter is jumbled up paragraphs
the paragraph are messed up you better fix it
This chapter would give you a Minus 1 Star review. it's better if you fixed this.
the fights seems batter quality compared to other fanfictions
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Bro the one chapter you completely butchered was the first fight one and its easily fixable with copy and paste
I thank you for the chapter.
thanks for the chapter