Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnated Realist In Another World

Some sentences are just bad written and make it hard to understand

So Mc and Mc’s father have the same mother? It first talked about Mc then his father and after that the new sentence began with Their mother..

The first Angelic voice sentence would be better if it begann with a ,,would,, and not ,,will,, based on Mc’s answer

Don't use those brackets, so annoying

I must drop the sentences are to bad written and it is confusing to read

looks promising