Comments of chapter undefined of the day of the apocalypse

I would like to advise you to try using Grammarly and get an editor. With that, the writing quality will increase by a huge margin! lf possible, try to make a Discord server and invite members who are willing to edit this novel. I can see a lot of potential in this Novel. Hope you improve the quality of chapters, otherwise many readers will drop it. Also, try to add details like how his room is, how he looks, how his family looks, etc, also described the environment when he's running... Add details like cool breeze, humid climate etc. Truth to be told, this have a lot of potential if implemented properly...

Man, you really need to work on grammar and need an editor.