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Comments of chapter undefined of My Dream Life As A Housewife

Ginny_Knights
Ginny_KnightsLv12Ginny_Knights

Yes, story good so far, but grammar was probably not editing well after remind me of machine translation.

HanaHime
HanaHimeLv15HanaHime

seriously... the translation needs editing

nelfalarioza
nelfalariozaLv14nelfalarioza

massive editing needed..

A4711
A4711Lv15A4711

Not bad so far, but does the editing improve?

Nellie67
Nellie67Lv14Nellie67

a good story so far but i am getting cobfused with grammar though

Shieyrvie_ACES
Shieyrvie_ACESLv4Shieyrvie_ACES

very bad grammar 😐 you don't even know when to use he and she

Daoist4Q6rAG
Daoist4Q6rAGLv11Daoist4Q6rAG

pensé que solo era mi idea pero leer así es impolsible😢

Princess_Nwamaka
Princess_NwamakaLv3Princess_Nwamaka

the story is quite good and interesting but the names keep changing and I do not know when to use pronouns here. pls improve the editing

HirsuiteGremlin27
HirsuiteGremlin27Lv15HirsuiteGremlin27

I usually don't care much for grammatical errors cause I've read so many that my eyes and brain automatically filters them out to make sense lol but when the protagonist has 2-3 different names that gets a bit annoying.. I'll have to try to get used to it haha thanks for the chapter 😂

hannarose
hannaroseLv4hannarose

Names . Pronouns .