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Re-comment : Thanks gor chapter. And a little opinion : in my opinion, Emma's personality changes are toi drastic. I know if she is an royalti and ay had been given an education about procreation. but it is impossible to change so fast. you know. from plain to seductive. maybe you can replace it with some of Emma's thoughts on the situation and make it a first experience as it should be. and by doing that will soften the characters and scenes to be more umm romantic?. because like, in canon, Emma has feelings for Noir. so maybe that scene would be more precious to Emma. and it will multiply words or chapters and will make us (readers) happy.