Comments of chapter undefined of Overlord: Reborn as an NPC

I've read the fanfic that this is based on and it feels like you're not changing anything at all. like you changed the gender and that's it.

it is decent actually. I can't say much as the story just started but still, I m looking forward to the next chapter

noice mybe he'd give her a chance if he told her she needs to chill out a lil

Thx for chap

I think à esdeath was totally unnecessary for the story

Um if the MC ever gets with anyone who's he gonna have his first time with? No offense but i hope it's not Shalltear or Esdeath

Obrigado pelo capitulo

This is a masterpiece please continue

Thanks for the chapter

author don't turn into a Tappei(author of Re:zero)

This is an amazing fic, Can't wait for more.

Do you have any schedule when you update?

morrreeeeee!

Nice

Thanks for the chapter I’m loving the story so far

Thanks for the chapter keep up the great work

Keep Going And Thank You For The Chapter

noice mybe he'd give her a chance if he told her she needs to chill out a lil