Delusion10
Why put in Esdeath? It just complicates things for you as you write..... oh well thanks for the chapter.
No problem man I'm just worried that it would become more difficult for you to write, generally, I have no problem with you putting Esdeath in your story and hopes it works. ps: I'm really liking your story
Delusion10:BTW if it makes you feel better that's all the new characters I planned
I hate myself for not liking this story, despite how well written it is. For all his talk of freedom, the MC is clearly falling into his role of a slave. And with his obsession of 'keeping his humanity' and being afraid of crazy monstrous girls, I feel like... it's not a story for me. Very unique setting and going against the common grain of Overlord fics, but being anti-meta in this case hurts the enjoyment more than anything, despite how well conceived and written the story is.