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Comments of chapter undefined of Star Wars: Scion Of The Sun

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Commin2aMiddle
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Great chapter! Not killing Mundi was the right decision, even if Plo needed to point it out. I like how he is still struggling for balance as it is so rare in the lore. It would be impossible to achieve in 2 years. If he was truly balanced, he would realize that keeping Mundi alive would get him and the Jedaii more in the end.

Falsic
FalsicLv15Falsic

Why spoil his strength in the comments? Why not let your story do the talking? You could convey it through his thoughts, for example. "He's strong, but nothing compared to Master Plo..." Just something from the top of my head, but it's better than telling your story through the author's notes.

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Benoit_Valtin
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4 awesome chapter, thanks and I see that I'm not the only one who doesn't include spoilers in author's notes 😍 I tell you, author, author's notes are not used to throw out excessive spoilers

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Braverock
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Nathan_Just
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When Jedi hear about what Mundi has done, him being on council will stain other council members reputation because of him and more Jedi will leave order like Pau'an male in Jedi Temple Guard (canon Grand inquisitor) who have grown tired of being held back.

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ouragan_
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It could be interesting for the number of departures from the Jedi Order to lead certain members, whether knights, masters, to reassess their commitment and thus take a 'Barash Vow,' until their voluntary departure from the Order during the Clone Wars or the official establishment of the GSA

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Angeltheweeb
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Bob_The_indian
Bob_The_indianLv13Bob_The_indian

please tell me he and his girlfriends will be consumed by the dark side cos that will be so sad a ruin the story

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AvidReader962
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Thanks for the awesome chapter

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peter_thomsen
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now a large number of jedi will join, since its called great schism

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Aeden_Emrys
Aeden_EmrysLv13Aeden_Emrys

Beautiful! Thanks for the chapters! Really looking forward to seeing how this new Schism will develop!

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FPM7
FPM7Lv10FPM7

Reevan 2.0

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Big_Daddy_E
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Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

Everworld12
Everworld12Lv5Everworld12

Yes to padme!!!! No to aayla!!!!

watzJ
watzJLv4watzJ

tftc!

SladeOfWolf
SladeOfWolfLv4SladeOfWolf

Thanks

Dark_Soulsbestgame
Dark_SoulsbestgameLv4Dark_Soulsbestgame

Nice

HadesChampion
HadesChampionLv4HadesChampion

why no advanced powers from either light or dark ? why tell them where they are

degermon
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Thanks