Comments of chapter undefined of Journey On Pokemon Island[Hiatus]

the chapters seem to be getting smaller and smaller each time. it doesn't even seem to be a single scene being completed in a chapter. don't get me wrong I'm happy for the pokemon fanfic and I like it. it's just taken 20 almost 30 chapters and they are at day 2.

So how often do u update

although story is good naration is bland and introducing another person to team up is too early

My Favorite Pokemon WHERE DAT DEINO AT???

Thanks for the chapter

Merci pour le chapitre !

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Thanks for the hard work

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thank you for chapter :)

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