Comments of chapter undefined of HP: Eagle Soars
HP: Eagle Soars
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While I'm liking your story this chapter was kind of strange to me, I just don't understand the logic, if the chapter before this one has shown us that he can interact and navigate in this political mess of a school then why is he isolating himself in his own house? the advantages does not compensate for the disadvantages, the little time he could have lost in helping his classmates could have been compensated at another time, logically speaking this way he would create a base to where he could stand in the coming raining days, not to mention that teaching a subject is a nice way to learn more about it as well
Thanks for the chapter! His fellow Ravenclaw is really annoying and it seems they finally show their true colors as an enemy. Hope Magnus will never forgive them cause they have cross the line. Looks like Magnus will be an outcast in Ravenclaw, I wonder did that mean Luna is the love interest, you know as a fellow outcast. Anyway can't wait for the next chapter!
Ok I'm a big fan of your use of the ROR and it's Room Of Hidden Things Most SI's forget about it or don't use it to it's full capability The school has been open for a thousand years the amount of Money and jewellery that has been lost and ended up in this Room should be extreme He should be able to find a expanded/shrinkable chest in the Room in good condition that he can throw it all into I would suggest leaving the jewellery for now since the Goblins might be able to trace ownership instead focus on the Money and set up a vault in Gringotts though be sure not to put it all into their bank we know they revolt from time to time
"making sure he was alone"? As long as the Map is in another's hands you can make sure all you want, you'll always be vulnerable And if the Twins see a first years disapear times and again they would corner him for the reason I understand that the ravenclaw plot point might be interesting to some but it honestly just look stupid to me, hope it's dealt with fast and permanently