you're right, even I is having a hard time how to brought things up, I'm sorry to disappoint you, it's my first time to really write with the intention of finishing it asap but sometimes I make mistakes because of rush. Please forgive to your useless author.
if you're wondering abou what happened to Naruki and Matsuki after meeting Korosaku lee, I think I'll put it in the next chapter, that's what I plan to, but if you think is weird after I release it, please reach out to me so I can ask my editor to help me figure it out
its not bad but having a flashback right in the middle of things is awkward and what happened to him being with Naruki? You really can't just flashback and time skip, it makes things difficult to understand and comprehend.
