Vansh_24
Also, I think you should write smaller chaps more frequently than long chaps less frequently. At least that is the advice I got...;shrug;. though do what you prefer. To be honest I like longer chaps.
well, since I was completely new to this, I didn't know average words per chap XD. But the later chaps are all long
Man the father really gets on my nerves! You did a great job in portraying him as he is though. Great job so far, keep it up!
The father of those guys is a fool maybe...
