Mortrexo
Hey I think it's late but your protagonist is the maximum existence and with an insurmountable power? So wouldn't that be boring? what is the point in the end will you make all possible enemies bad because yes or idiots?
I did not expect less because it is to be with 3 souls 2 powerful beings and a candidate to break the order of the world.I just hope it's not how his mother killing children is too much for me
Mortrexo:They aren't. Yasenia will lose, not challenge some things, grow slowly, and experience loss, and even if she is strong, she isn't insurmountable by any means. Of course, she isn't weak because she is a MC, someone that I the author created to be the "protagonist" of the world, meaning she will bring change, create previously thought impossible feats, and surprise everyone around her. If not, if the MC was a random person on the side, the story wouldn't be as entertaining.