Zevren
In my opinion it is ok so far revealing a dark possible future and dealing with not only betrayal and what is essentially possessio by a nigh omnipotent being is not what can be simply glossed over in one chapter. These heroes are broken and fixing or even healing will be a long and painful road. Keep up the good work.
This is a really really good story, thank you very much author :) The best chatroom fanfic I have read to this day and I'm looking forward to how you continue with the story, especially how Jean deals with everything after waking up and some group chat interactions with Anakin. I actually love it that you didn't rush the 'How to tame a -phoenix- eeh I meant trauma' arc and I don't mind it the least even if you manage to keep it going for another 5-10 chapters. What I'm not so sure about is how you would even start dealing with Rias, I get angry and frustrated just reading about characters that behave even just the slightest bit like her, changing her mindset in regards to maybe starting with training would honestly be so exhausting. Good luck with that Jacob ;) Thanks again for another wonderful chapter.