Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of the conqueror system

Thanks for the chapter. I’m enjoying the current development, though, I agree with Mimic. Even with character development in mind, establish with readers a base set of characteristics that Ethan will maintain and don’t flip-flop on them. Instantaneous mood changes are also jarring for readers and breaks immersion, so that is something else to keep in mind.

I'll choose to trust you, but I recommend defining if the mc is scum or if he is somewhat normal. Don't make him bipolar.

good chapter. But there are many sentences that are written wrong, the commas(,) are in the wrong places most of the time

thanks…it is your novel do what you deem fit…but just don’t ruin the novel

I am really enjoying the plot so far. I also like the current love development ,I hate all those novels with a forced or stupid harem plot. Thank you Authors and take your time so it doesn't spoil the novel.

your web novel your choices don't make choices if you don't like them just to please some of the readers

Thanks for the chapter

Yolo thxs👍🏾😍

great work as usual

Thanks for the chapter !!!

Thanks for the chapter

tftc

thanks for the chap

thanks for the chapter

penggemar rpg dan harem mendukung penulis.

Thanks for chapter

thanks for the chapter

You use to many commas