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Aight. Will say I was quick to judge when the kid was suddenly introduced into the story. After being saturated with the archetype of a person getting stuck to one of the characters and starting a one-sided rivalry with the MC for said character’s attention, as well as having minimal-to-no relevance to the story aside from being a half-baked attempt of comedy or bait for reader-interaction, I was starting to expect the same from this one. Thankfully, with some context, she’s actually going to have importance in this plot, so I rescind my complaints for now. Hopefully it goes uphill from here, and sorry bout the assumptions!
Weirdly_Random:Haven’t read this far into the novel for ORV, so I wasn’t expecting the kid, nor did I connect the dots.image