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Comments of chapter undefined of Vampire's Slice Of Life

ThePhoenix94
ThePhoenix94Lv15ThePhoenix94

You should keep an eye on the third person and first person point of view. You seem to mix them a lot, especially in this chapter

Almas_Farhan_Arnob
Almas_Farhan_ArnobLv4Almas_Farhan_Arnob

author,,,your tag say that a system here,,,is there any system...

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Milf_Supremacy
Milf_SupremacyLv4Milf_Supremacy

thanx for the chapter.

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KKH
KKHLv4KKH

thanks for the chapter

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Bobainox
BobainoxLv4Bobainox

(゚ο゚人)) thanks for the chapter

RARC19
RARC19Lv4RARC19

Thanks for the chapter!

Kiritoga
KiritogaLv14Kiritoga

Plot left this story, so far it’s kissing, pecking, hugging, milking, and etc

DiabloRedfox
DiabloRedfoxLv13DiabloRedfox

tftc

Little_Vampire
Little_VampireLv3Little_Vampire

thanks for the chapter

Kamishiro12
Kamishiro12Lv13Kamishiro12

Thanks for the chapter

Armitano
ArmitanoLv4Armitano

Thanks for the chapter

PhantomNite629
PhantomNite629Lv15PhantomNite629

thx for the chap

Normal_ROB
Normal_ROBLv4Normal_ROB

Thanks For The Chapter.

PatiencePatience
PatiencePatienceLv1PatiencePatience

A death flag?