SocialHippo
You should keep an eye on the third person and first person point of view. You seem to mix them a lot, especially in this chapter
author,,,your tag say that a system here,,,is there any system...
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thanx for the chapter.
thanks for the chapter
(゚ο゚人)) thanks for the chapter
Thanks for the chapter!
Plot left this story, so far it’s kissing, pecking, hugging, milking, and etc
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Thanks for the chapter
thx for the chap
Thanks For The Chapter.
A death flag?