Comments of chapter undefined of Gravity Mage with Level-Up System

this novel can being improve with more plot armour such as give the mc true goal where his journey will end as it will make interesting .Next, please write more action for mc where he will know the true world outside the campus. I would love if no other love interest or romance in this novel ..For me the sub plot for love interest or romance may shake the foudation off ..maybe Author can place it when in peak chapter or before the climax chapter..that all for now[img=recommend] keep going and make this more better than earlier chapter \(^~^)/

Rubbish novel so far

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needs some grammar and word spacing check on first couple of paragraphs