Comments of chapter undefined of Gravity Mage with Level-Up System

firstly, the story line and background is amazing. I like the MC, he is a bit quirky. the in between info that is not generally pertaining to the MC's growth or progress the story line I feel we're pointless.

23 chaoters in and having to pay already is a little disappointing I respect the author for trying something but the character development storyline is all over the place agreed why check system she it’s the same, hey system how do I upgrade, how to get my stats higher, etc. another point is that it’ just like hey I got a system no big deal I’m not inquiring the heck out of it… Respect to author for trying but the writing is juvenile. Stopping now but had high hopes for s full on gravity type “mage” story. Good luck

This is where I leave after 22 chapters gotta pay I’d be fine with it normally but I’ve seen more things I don’t like as opposed to things I like here

Chap 22, keeps checking his status, not a single fight yet, i hope this is not snail pace or i'm out

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Great, I hope the chapter Will not be short in the future

good work author