THE_LEVI
this story is going in good direction but it takes quite a lot of time to understand what author is trying to say and this chapter is clear indication that english isn't author's first language. There are a lot of missing punctuation marks. Author you enter the story quite often like 'let's begin the story' Or 'here comes the superpowers' (but that wasn't unlikable) summary:plz make a bit longer chapters, improve ur english and lasty keep up the good work! đđđ