Comments of chapter undefined of The Mafia Ceo's Treasure

great starting

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story starts well. nicely described. FL has a soft character. Despite fear, she manages to put her emotion aside and has treated the stab wound from the ML and even called the ambulance! Stress always makes you forget something. Nice!

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Intriguing start n hope it will b one of my favorite Book.

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Love the way you write 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 excited to read more!!!

Nice start I love the way you described what was happening everything was clear to me. The only thing I have a problem with is the way this line was written "His hand covered his side to prevent a lot of blood from escaping his stab wound" what I would suggest is "His hand covered his side to prevent any blood from spurting out of his body" this is my opinionou dont need to listen to it. Any great start