Comments of chapter undefined of I am the Entertainment Tycoon

thanks for the chapter and keep up the great work 😁👍 Cant wait to see when he dips his toes in book writing, then movie screenwriting, maybe even a director who knows.

I love the stroy line but the story could definitely benefit from some editing. for example "yes we want chef" would read better as "yes we want to" strictly speaking this would still be not how a native speaker would say this however you may want to maintain it as a stylistic choice. overall great work but I'd love to see some minor tweaks to improve readability!

TFTC

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thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Thanks