Comments of chapter undefined of Fighting Destiny

This is a depiction of high level of commitment to study and focus. We need more if this vibe and creativity from you. Keep it up ...

Interesting start...

I think you could have done much better though.

I don't fully get it! I will continue reading...

Cool

just wonderful

Nice beginning been reading since and have been so impressed with the book I decided to comment.Dont naturally like to comment and write reviews but l have to tell the author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]

I could have sworn I dropped a comment ??? Anyways, let me just drop it again. Since this is the prologue, it is supposed to be more attention grabbing that this. It's too short, and lacks adequate description. It also suffers from a sever lack of detail. The only thing I got from this, is that there is a pretty girl, and a guy is reaching towards her. That's all...

This prologue is too short and provides little to no context on what it is I'm supposed to be looking forward to. All we know is that there is a girl with a tantalizing body, and a guy that is reaching towards it. That's all. You can do better that this....

So short🥱

First novel ? Wow you're born with the Instinct of a writer!!!

And who is ' she'?

Nice start.whats gonna happen next.what is he reaching for?😂

Nice next pls

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Though it's a little short though

Wow

What exactly is he reaching for😅😁😏

Beautifully crafted start