Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: White Hunter
One Piece: White Hunter
BravoBuds
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thanks for the chap. For the little brains that don't understand complex plots, Pierro isn't OP, CP0 is the best of the best, which is under direct orders from the gorosei, the order he received from the 5 elders was to get rid of Smoker without Garp turning against the navy or the world government, that's why the whole plan was to capture smoker alive so that garp doesn't get angry with them (hero of the navy, it is said that he was the only one who could stand up to the pirate king, and father of Dragon the revolutionary). Smoker would die in the crowd in the prison because of the whitebeard pirates and Garp, knowing the death of his student, would direct his anger against the pirates, remaining loyal to the navy (CP0 agents infiltrated as marines or pirates would stop the mutiny but not before have caused many casualties, smoker included). Smoker was already worn out by his fight against Crocodile plus the trip, his mourning for his friend Cancer, and watching Law for several days without sleeping in flavance to make them safe, he couldn't fight against Pierro. Sorry for the super long comment, it makes me angry to read other commentators saying that your story is going down, your story is wonderful and exciting, you are already at chapter 85 and your effort to write, edit and upload chapters almost every 24 hours, you even let me know If you take a long break and don't leave us hanging. You are a great author, thanks for writing for us.
This is taking a pretty bad turn to be honest, Smoker is quite an idiot knowing what the navy and world government is like and still joins them and then shows too much morality by acting pathetically and also that it's that CP0 force if they were like that The strong ones would not have problems with the pirates. The one who captured Smoker and also stole his sword is very exaggerated. This fic is about to go down started well but is already frustrating with plot holes with the theme of Rocks
Whitebeard is younger and his disease won't affect him till shanks became yonko in 1514 or 1516. Admirals are younger so weaker than before. Not enough warlords as Canon. Blackbeard won't fight for marines cause he never fights when he doesn't benefit from it. Revolutionary army or Dragon will fight to bring out smoker. Garp may refuse to fight against whitebeard if smoker is not released. Kaido is an unknown factor which for sure shanks can't stop. Lastly CP0 is shown to be too strong in this novel which is the thing I can't digest. Shiki also wouldn't be so strong that garp can't win against in an hour, he was weakened in edd war due to wheel in head, then when he freed himself from impel down he gave away his legs so more weaker. He should be only at the level of first commander like marco, katakuri and king or highest as zoro not above that.
