Comments of chapter undefined of Omni-Dimensional Chat Group [dropped, read the rewrite]

Nah in my opinion your doing a really good job so far, you got good grammars, good storyline, and a lot more so this is actually a good thing that it is slow paced as being too fast will make the story kinds forced.

and the theme chat group is interaction betwen member of group and dont about just mc get girls

You are doing good job

well about that i dont care but if you make 1 mission so long like 50 chapter++ it become boring like novel akikan

You are doing a great job with this book

I like the way the story is going and the way you write it so I hope you keep going

no te preocupes, me gusta como avanza la historia, solo trata de apresurar algunas escenas porque sino se perdera el hilo de la historia, recuerda que mientras mas dure mas el personaje se aclimisa a los ideales del mundo, mas se desconectara de su mundo, recuerda que todavia tiene que seguir la trama de su mundo, otra cosa, ya que estamos dandole tecnicas de arte marciales, por que no le das una tecnica de cultivo multiproposito, porque antes de que ingrese al mundo de dxd, espero que alcanse el nivel de un clase alta o suprema, quisas deberias darle un talento o almenos una habilidad de fusion de habilidades, porque despues el mc ganara nuevas habilidades que seran similares y se guian por principios diferentes, como shundo, shumpo, afeitado, etc. incluso hay tecnicas de endurecimiento que usan diversas energias para efectuarse

God so far usually the mc would be ball deep and not a virgin though some parts feel extra long

it's fine, you did the right thing. I kinda like your story for not just forget one girl and focus on the other girl.

Вы делаете всё правильно,продалжайте в тоже темпе

nah it's good to have a character development. because many fix just buldoze that and make it confusing

actually this slow pace story is exactly what we need rather than the Pokemon here we come

Author-san How do you feel about adding Irisviel to the chat two years before the start of the Grail War?

Ami me gusto la pespectiba de las mujeres megusta mucho en una historia es refrescante cambiar de punto de vista del mc

just waiting for dxd part

gracias por el capitulo como siempre un gusto

easy just don't pick up so many women in each world your making them feel cheap. just pick 2

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