Comments of chapter undefined of Omni-Dimensional Chat Group [dropped, read the rewrite]

thanks for the chapter 👌 what does Justine look like?

why mc is choosing a trash oc ?

See here? His "intuition" just have to coincide with the "special task mission" which would be dating justine. Its like everything is going his way, there is no conflict, no excitement, nothing. Also to point it out, you are just making him stronger with brute force but there is none of his powers have technique. He didnt even master using weapons or honed it but you are making him more overpowered than it should be.

See what i told in the previous chap.? His "intuition" is this and that. Why dont you use "intuition" on serious things like fights or dangers? Because in every novel i read, intuition is a thing that is honed through repeating a action over and over again etc. What you call "intuition" here is basically a "gut feeling". Anyone with a normal working brain can just connect the dots happening on the hospital. Use "intuition" carefully. Because it is annoying seeing you using "intuition" in every situation when you can just clearly let him "piece the pieces of evidence" or just let him think or make him use gut feeling.

Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the hard work

Thanks for the chapter

why you do that ? HAHAHAHHAH

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

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Great Chap, keep up the awesome work 😍

como se ve justine buena pregunta xD gracias por elcapitulo como siempre un gusto

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the update~

Thanks for the chapter author-sama!!

Gracias por el Capitulo

Nice chapter