Comments of chapter undefined of Game of lust: Crown Prince's maid

One other thing the discription mentioned time travel yet it's chapter 2 and it feels like the story is all over the place. I get that we want to get to know the main character and her friends and family but if she is going to switch places (time) are the people described in the early chapters essential to the main story? Because if not you could always add stories like this as a flashback when the main character is missing here prevoius life. If flasbacks are not your thing than maybe have a different structure. I had almost expected her to go on the time travel alreday since they where in the lab but than they go out again. It put me off a little, as if the story would go backwards. This is just my personal opinion others may like this style of story telling. So maybe have the two friends meet first than go shopping and than comfort their friend and go to the lab afterward 🤔. Also what time of the day is it, that they can do all this in one day? If they are highschoolers don't they need to go to school? Is it a weekend day? Do they have a part time job in the lab? How come a teenager can boss adults around to go home? 😅 At tha5s part I really thought she was another Professor in the lab. It's a lot of open questions for just two chapters. As a reader we can't know these things since the story is in your mind 😉 I don't mean you need to reveal everything about the character at once. That would be just boring. A little more details about the characters(especially the main cahracter), the suroundings, the time frame when things take place, why the characters interaced in a certain way would be appreciated. And I'm sorry i won't keep reading the story as it is right now. No matter how intrigued i was at the mention of time travel the writing style is just not my thing. I hope you can get around to revise the story. I'm looking forward to that 😊.