Hamapo
Honestly the pacing for this is extremely fast a lot of nothing happens every chapter like I get he wants to be the best player but his character is bloodthirsty to the point of insanity like is he supposed to be emotionless his mom hasnt died he’s got a fresh start but he’s honestly so generic it hurts
Thisbis a great novel, but so I think it’s pushing two things too much 1. It’s been one chapter and he’s already fangirled his old girl 2. This whole “nothing but the goal, I am an emotionless killing machine” thing, while probably realistic for someone who had gone through what he has, should be recovering to some degree, but we’ve repeatedly seen him doing things that someone at his level should know better than. The evil ring, the soul, and a few other things that will have long lasting and dangerous implications for his character and, judging for what we’ve seen from this layout so far, his real body. From the moment he felt physical implications of what happened in game, he should have had klaxons blaring like defcon 1. Instead it’s handwaved as “I’m not used to it”. Sorry this went on for so long.