Comments of chapter undefined of In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom

golden trio's nanny and a complex hero mc.... waste of time. This story has become generic

Nev x pansy! Niceee

Pansy for the victory baby

So nothing done about the bullying just a detention for snapping back. Great teaching. Why the Maxima version? That shouldve been rather nasty. Couldve pointed out the idiocy of the detention or at least used the regular Bombarda. Still rooting for Hermione but not against both her and Pansy.

I’ve enjoyed your story so far kind of had hiccups here and there but most of all it was pretty good. this chapter kind of ruined it. it was like the chapter with the troll. Your character is being weird. How can he say things like oh well Hermione’s going to be future minister and talk about the future from canon but then you go out of his way to change things. Don’t you think it would be great if a pureblood was killed in Hogwarts. It would actually make the school much safer and force the teachers maybe focus on education. Your character is very confusing his actions and his words are going against each other. Why is he playing a hero why is he getting involved. i’ll be honest with you every time he interacts with the trio getting annoying because this is not who you said this character was supposed to be. I liked your story I like the strong independent neville that wanting to improve. A Neville who minds his own business unless he sees profit in it for himself and his family. That situation with detention could’ve been done completely different and have him coming out on top. It made no sense in the way he did it to get himself thrown into detention.

Thanks for chapter

Nice

Thanks for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter! Have my powerstone!

Thanks for chapter.

Thanks for the chapter

great job man