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Comments of chapter undefined of My Hollywood System

MedTryglaw
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2/3 of this chapter describes the plot of the movie... it's lazy writing just to push the next chapter without much effort.

ArthurCE10
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No hate here(Love your stories) but man, almost half of the chapter is a description of the movie.

UltimateGodlyGene
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bro no offense but third of the chapter is the synopsis of catch me if you can.

Krystknt
KrystkntLv5Krystknt

not really a fan of Andrew (as spiderman) but well he won, so I respect the voting result. looking forward for the actor introduction. perhaps, he will be a newbie actor or a matinee idol? also, author please limit the narration of film plot summary. A title is enough & an idea of what is about. Readers can google other info (if they haven't watch the movie already). just a suggestion... thank you.

TypeVos
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I wonder, will this be how Tobey Maguire be introduced?

Iceling
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Andrew Garfield doesn't suit tobi's spiderman movies...but ok, it's a fanfiction I guess. 😂

Archit_Ayush
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Man, to be honest when I read the Will was offering Leo Spider-Man's role, I was quite excited to see him as Spider-Man. Well, anyway Thanks for the chapter ❤️. Can't wait for the next chapter ❤️.

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Artem_Lavrov
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First comment

MinMinOppa
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Just saving but is he gonna make Supernatural, Vampire Diaries, Teen Wolf and Twilight etc but better with them in the same universe? He can make the good plot better, rewrite or remove the bad plot all together and even create new plot based on the whole franchise universe.

LordValmar
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Andrew was my favorite Spiderman, though at the same time he was a bit too "cool". I mean Peter Parker is supposed to be this wimpy bullied nerd kid and frankly Andrew just doesn't look like the type. Though that could probably be tweaked in editing to make him seem more dweebish pre-spiderbite.

IsseiODR
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Will will learn that you can't walk on people's toes in Hollywood. He has to realize that he himself is setting a target on his head

Catman
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Exp

Alien_Space_Bat
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When is he going do other things than direction....... like continue acting,etc...... it's not just about direction right?

MIR_Sajeeb
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I am waiting for my turn Make Mr.Bean❤️

MIR_Sajeeb
MIR_SajeebLv13MIR_Sajeeb

Why not use Mr.Bean ❤️❤️ Famous after all

javaizen
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thanks for the chapter

JapaOuO
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Thanks for the chapter

AntisocialRell
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Thanks for the chapter

Xboxgorgo18
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HEAVENLY EXP FACTION !

TANRICI
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