Please use actual quotation marks during a conversation, even if it's on a phone call in the story. The improper use of hyphens is driving me nuts as a reader.
srsly... you need to have longer chapter or up the pace .. we just just read about him saying.. sorry wont take your movie and him having a phone call -_-
Man....the feels the second half of the chapter gave me. Even made me sad. Right in the kokoro. Now it's time for Will to rise from the ashes and become the new ASHEN ONE ! After all....he makes his own luck.