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Comments of chapter undefined of Forced Bride Of The Vampire Lord

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Forced Bride Of The Vampire Lord

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Sula_Moni
Sula_MoniLv1Sula_Moni

Interesting topic, but someone should proofread this. Constant change of narrative perspective - sometimes third, sometimes first person - and that often in the middle of a sentence is very confusing.

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Daphne_20
Daphne_20Lv12Daphne_20

I agree šŸ‘

1yr
Somie98
Somie98Lv13Somie98

Dear Anna seems fishy.... did she know abt it allšŸ¤”šŸ¤”šŸ¤”šŸ¤”

1yr
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BrewingFantasies
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It's been months I've read something in FL section, this seems good. Well written, smoothly flowing, and the style seems to be inspired. Will be reading ahead! (~aysel)

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WhiteVest
WhiteVestLv10WhiteVest

is thar any way to talk about the King?

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Mala_Smith_6556
Mala_Smith_6556Lv2Mala_Smith_6556

good book

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giomart85NY
giomart85NYLv15giomart85NY

So far interesting story šŸ‘šŸ½

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Mlga0_put_7166
Mlga0_put_7166Lv5Mlga0_put_7166

Enjoying this book.

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Daoistu5WxTx
Daoistu5WxTxLv1Daoistu5WxTx

i love this book

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Daoist6792pa
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Mitzi_Schild
Mitzi_SchildLv15Mitzi_Schild

so far I'm enjoying this story. poor Hazel

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Sulaimon_Demilade
Sulaimon_DemiladeLv2Sulaimon_Demilade

Who knows if hazel and the night creature get alongā€¦i believe the guy wonā€™t hurt šŸ˜ž herā€¦so hazel keep yur head straight ,donā€™t be scared šŸ˜±

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tamara_alleje
tamara_allejeLv4tamara_alleje

the father was so heartless.. poor girl.

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Daoist7uRWVI
Daoist7uRWVILv1Daoist7uRWVI

nice

1yr
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