komega
Плохо. Даже не стал читать сюжет, после пары строк. Местоимения "Я" почти в каждом предложении. Насчитал только в одной главе этих "Я" 55. Это просто раздрожительно читать.
I like the beginning of your story
No seals? I’ m pretty sure all root shinobi get curse seals placed on them for mind control and information control
I don't like when mc works under someone and gets thrashed here and there by others. And who is love interest?
Thanks thor
Thanks for chapter
The grammar and structure of your sentences isn't great, it's not unreadable but still a bit jarring and annoying to read.
thanks for the chapter
Great chapter
nice chapter