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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Root Ninja

DaoistFbOtWp
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Плохо. Даже не стал читать сюжет, после пары строк. Местоимения "Я" почти в каждом предложении. Насчитал только в одной главе этих "Я" 55. Это просто раздрожительно читать.

Herohero
HeroheroLv3Herohero

I like the beginning of your story

SpoiledSecrets
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No seals? I’ m pretty sure all root shinobi get curse seals placed on them for mind control and information control

Man_of_culture_69
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I don't like when mc works under someone and gets thrashed here and there by others. And who is love interest?

Adi_Gunawan_1423
Adi_Gunawan_1423Lv1Adi_Gunawan_1423

Thanks thor

Zero93
Zero93Lv6Zero93

Thanks for chapter

Should_Be_Working
Should_Be_WorkingLv3Should_Be_Working

The grammar and structure of your sentences isn't great, it's not unreadable but still a bit jarring and annoying to read.

5paghetti_5auce
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thanks for the chapter

Hussein_King
Hussein_KingLv2Hussein_King

Great chapter

Jack_Frost_3962
Jack_Frost_3962Lv4Jack_Frost_3962

nice chapter