Doctorgreen
Liking the story so far Just wanted to reply to your note about single quote (') and double quote (") marks. Single quote('), in literature from the US, is typically used for a character's thoughts or when quoting a quote. Double quote(") is used when a character is speaking. It is my understanding that single quotes can be used for speech with literature from England as well ( Though I may be wrong here). Regardless, both US and England tend to be consistent in their usage through a story to prevent any confusion. Basically, stick with one for speech from every character and the other for thoughts or it just looks confusing. Hope that helped!