Comments of chapter undefined of Shadow Slave
Shadow Slave
Guiltythree
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I really hope that after this 3d nightmare there will be more povs and character interactions. The plot is great, I like the fights, and Sunny's development is good, but I feel like the other characters are pretty hollow and haven't been fleshed out enough. How do they feel about what is happening? What emotions are they feeling? What are their goals? Povs and dialogues can really help a lot to do that, but I notice that there are very few of them.
So this is where they will find the Jade Palace and meet the Jade Queen, prob first seeker, then? She knows the horrible truth that even the Gods fear, guessing that the truth involves the god’s prison of Laws that is holding back the Corruption is failing and the sleeping god will no longer hold out. perhaps the tomb itself is a prison holding the sleeping god or chaos. And soon, when the sleeping god awakens, all of existence will be put into the path of Chaos. 🙂
