Comments of chapter undefined of Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

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Eli_Jon_JonesLv14Eli_Jon_Jones

I fall in love with this story more and more with each passing chapter! thank you for creating a group of people that are so well developed. Thank you for writing such an amazing world filled with emotions and concepts that just blaze in my mind, imprinting thoughts, emotion, ideas, and hope. I'm going to cry when the story ends as I do with any well written work. anything I read that is at this level I mourn the ending just add i would mourn a friend moving away or someone dear to me passing away. thank you for creating something at such a level that I will mourn it when it is over.

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MongrelsSonLv14MongrelsSon

They conquered the vortex in one chapter?!?!!?!!?!!? I thought we were gonna spend the next week navigating the torrent. LETS GOOOOO

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spencewuLv15spencewu

next chapter, these mist boys gonna pop up

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Cheryl_Clarke_1499Lv14Cheryl_Clarke_1499

Thank you for not dragging out the trip to the island, too long. I am getting a little impatient waiting to see the others.

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NobleQueenBeeLv5NobleQueenBee

Whew. Smooth-ish sailing for once

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Kathy_GurganusLv15Kathy_Gurganus

Yessss!!! Man, G3 can really come up with some crazy stuff!! I'm loving this island although I'd love to know more about how & why its placed the way it is. oh & what's really causing the vortex? Natural occurrence or nightmare creature of unimaginable size!!!

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